Part 288a
Marie’s entire body was shaking as she stood silently in the Labyrinth. She was in a special room, built especially for her by Satan himself, using a lot of his innate energy and abilities.
The room was a large monitoring room, filled with wall-to-wall supercomputers and hundreds of monitors, used for monitoring the situation on Earth and plenty of other locations, such as the Moon and Mars, all at once. Dozens of imps moved around here and there, the smartest of their tiny brethren, but not much smarter than a very dull human.
Marie, however, was trembling noticeably as she held the datapad in her hands that would seal the fate of humanity. A command was sitting onscreen, prompting her to activate the doomsday device that would surely kill billions of people. She shook in fear of what was to come next, not because she feared humanity’s response, or because she feared the demons if they were left to rule, but because she feared the unknown.
Humans, of course, always fear that which they do not understand. But nothing is less predictable and understandable than a tentative future turned into total chaos by one massive act of random destruction. Once she activated this prompt, everything would change. The balance of power would shift tremendously. Alliances would crumble and reform.
Marie, though, was even more fearful of the unknown. Her entire life rested on science, manipulation, and the act of reading and interpreting data. As a young girl, she had dreamed of total world domination, though she quickly grew out of that childhood farce. Growing older, she had discovered the existence of the demons by chance, and grew jealous of their awesome power as she learned more and more about them. Once again though, she realized attaining the power the demons possessed was physically impossible for her weak human body.
Still, she matured and her ambitions shifted goals again, now aimed towards her current goal, which was the advancement of science. No science in particular was her goal, though her body always quivered when it came to weapons of war. As a young girl, she had loved playing ‘war’ with her brothers, even if it wasn’t a girly thing to do, and even as she aged, war was a fascinating topic for her.
And in the end, it was always men that died at war, not women. So if she were to stoke a major war somehow, it wouldn’t affect her.
In the end, her brothers had died, along with the rest of her family, in a tragic house fire. The whole of her life had hardened her, leading her to the conclusion that life was unfair. There was no justice in this world. The only way to win at life was to make herself as untouchable as possible. She would become so powerful that even the Creator would not be able to stop her.
…
Still, this act was unlike anything she had done in the past. One might even have, for a while, called her an ally of humanity. The anti-energy weapons she had taken from the Nazi research facilities had been used to create weapons that could eliminate the angels… or the demons. If they should turn against humanity, or herself, they would be driven back.
But now here she was, about to kill off billions of people. And she trembled… for nothing she would ever do for the rest of her life could possibly redeem her for this heinous act.
She felt a presence behind herself, a familiar overwhelming and intimidating aura that made her feel like a small, weak mortal every time she felt it.
"Having doubts? Second thoughts?" Satan spoke from behind her, his voice filled with amusement at the internal struggle even she must be madly coping with.
"I should think so." Keeping her voice even, Marie swallowed carefully. "Even the Jews that collaborated with the Nazis must have been filled with regrets. However, they were simply trying to save their own skin. As for myself…"
Satan snickered as he stared at the back of the tiny human in front of himself. "Yes, as for you, you’re just a greedy soul looking out for number one. But I can understand the sentiment. The demons have become greedy, as have the gods and angels. I can’t say I respect it, but I understand it."
Satan paced forwards a step or two until he was standing directly beside her. Her heart was pounding rapidly as his eyes flicked down to the screen. His tiny smile turned into a full bore grin as he saw her trembling hand hovering over the prompt onscreen. "Would you like for me to do it? I won’t hold it against you if you want to back out now, but I’m going to do it one way or another."
"No. I’ll do it. I just need a moment." Marie bit off each sentence harshly as she gritted her teeth. It wasn’t easy, making a choice like this.
Her finger twitched as she lowered it down slowly, hesitantly. Finally, it was a hair’s length above the screen.
She swallowed again, her dry throat giving her one last warning about the regrets she would be living with for the rest of her existence. "Well… here we go."
In the blink of an eye, she pressed her finger down the rest of the way, as ‘YES’ lit up on her screen.
An instant later, she exhaled deeply, realizing she had been holding her breath. It was over now. She wouldn’t even know anything had happened, if it weren’t for the monitoring room showing images of the world around her.
Turning to look at a monitor showing a local city in Kansas, tears filled her eyes as the camera began to shake.
"What have I done?"
Satan placed a hand on her shoulder, grinning evilly as he too watched the display.
"Exactly what you needed to do. With this, you have cemented yourself as a true ally of the demons."
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A man pounded furiously on the door of the large estate, slapping the doorbell over and over again as rage and anger filled his mind. The rain outside was scheduled to end at precisely 4:30 AM, and it was 4:17 now. If he had just woken up a bit later, he might not be drenched to his bones.
But he didn’t care. What was rain, compared to the lives of billions?
"Beatrix! Supreme commander Beatrix!!!" Kicking on the sturdy oak door, he pounded furiously until he finally heard a slow, hesitant unlocking of the door as a butler peeked out at the sopping wet man.
"Who are you? The lady of the house is sleeping right now. No visitors."
In a flash, the man shoved the door aside, pushing the butler out of the way as he stormed past. "To hell with sleep! Have you not seen the news yet?!"
The butler, Alonso, glared madly at the crazed fool who had barged his way into the house. "My word! If you don’t get off the premises immediately, I will call security! You deranged madman!"
The man turned and blasted a fiery hot glare of rage and annoyance at the butler. "You idiot! The world is under attack! Get Beatrix down here now!"
Alonso gazed at the man’s disheveled appearance, suddenly feeling a note of incredulity in his voice. "Ben Brown? You’re the one who…" Realizing suddenly who the man was, Alonso suddenly felt his heart slamming in his chest. If the great Benjamin Brown was this angry, it must be serious.
"I’ll wake her at once. Follow me."
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Beatrix stood stiffly in her room, watching the newscast scrolling over her screen, shock having overtaken her body and paralyzed her with a feeling of hopelessness, as the reports came in. North America was effectively gone. Canada, the States, and even half of South America too. The tremors and volcanoes had sprung up out of nowhere. Ash was rapidly filling the atmosphere.
Already reports were coming in on her private military data feed. The ash cloud was set to spread over the entire planet within a day or two. Only the weather control systems would be any use in slowing it down. The first volcano, at the epicenter of all these calamities, had exploded out of nowhere with the force of Krakatoa from the 1800’s. Its power was unrivaled and an incredible expression of the forces belonging to Mother Nature.
For sure, this was no mere weather phenomenon. This was not the result of plates shifting or random tectonic forces converging.
This was an attack.
Was it the Volgrim? Of course it was.
As she stared limply at the reports scrolling in, her bedroom door was suddenly thrown open, as her butler rushed in, followed by a familiar looking man she had not seen in a few years. His sopping wet body might have made it difficult to tell who he was, but his bulky and toned body, black skin, and trademark purple uniform gave him away at once.
"Beatrix! You’re awake?" Ben Brown breathed rapidly as he glanced first from her, to the holoscreen on the wall, then to the pad in her hands. She knew.
"Yes. I’m awake." Beatrix spoke haltingly. She was feeling a rush of emotions she had not felt in a long time as the realization of what had happened was setting in.
"It’s an attack by the Volgrim, doubtlessly." Ben calmed down as he took in Beatrix’s figure, standing there proudly, concealing her emotions so as to keep her subordinates calm in the face of danger. A true commander, of course.
"Yes. An attack." Beatrix felt her grip tightening on the datapad in her hands as she stared, not at Ben, but past him, far past him into an unseen void. "I was a fool."
Ben’s expression turned into confusion. "Huh? What are you talking about?"
"Peace. I wanted peace. I wanted peace with these aliens. I wanted peace with them, because I don’t like war." Beatrix turned her empty gaze towards the casualty reports on her screen. "And look what it got me."
Ben stared carefully at the commander’s face, as he took a few steps towards her. "Supreme commander, this isn’t your fault. We need you at the headquarters, it’s chaos down there."
"What would you know." Beatrix punctuated her question rhetorically, indicating it was a statement.
Ben froze as he stopped walking towards her. Something about her demeanor… "Commander, are you alri-"
"I SAID WHAT WOULD YOU KNOW?!" Beatrix snapped, throwing her datapad to the ground and stomping in with her right foot as a flash of hot fury exploded inside of her. Ben and Alonso jumped back at the sight of the usually reserved woman exploded in rage. "I tried to negotiate with these fucking monsters for more than fifty years! LOOK WHAT IT GOT ME!"
Howling at the top of her lungs, Beatrix turned to her bedside dresser and overturned it, throwing it to the ground as she started smashing everything she could get her hands on. Tearing off a leg from a table sitting against the wall, she used the leg to start smashing everything in the room as tears of rage poured down her face.
Ben and Alonso stood back, not in fear, but out of sorrow. The pain she felt must have been…
After a minute or two of tearing around the room, destroying every damned thing in sight, Beatrix seemed to suddenly calm down as she slumped to the floor, tears pouring down her face as she wiped them away furiously with both hands. "Fuck! Shit! It’s not right! It’s just not right!"
Ben walked forwards but kept his distance from her as he knelt down to her level. "This isn’t your fault, commander. This is their fault."
"It’s not that! It’s… my family… they were visiting the East Coast of America for Christmas. They’re… they’re…" She bit off her sentence as rage and sorrow overtook her. "My mother, and my father, and both of my sisters…"
Ben shimmied closer to her as he wrapped both arms around her. "I’m… I’m sorry commander. I lost some family too, I think. I don’t know, I’m just not thinking about it right now. We all deal with it in different ways."
Beatrix slowly stopped babbling as she succumbed to grief for a minute or two. Finally, she furiously wiped away her tears as she stood up slowly, pulling herself up by the edge of the bed.
Rising to her full height, she stood only a few inches shorter than Ben Brown, who was a tall and sturdy 6’5". The both of them looked quite intimidating as the sadness slowly melted away.
"Those… bastards." Beatrix felt a snarl curl up on her face as she wiped at her puffed and swollen eyes. "This is the final straw. Chancellor Brown, we’re putting an end to all diplomacy. No more attempts at peace. No more idealistic notions or childhood fantasies. We’re going to crush these invaders."
She glanced over at the holoscreen, as reports were coming in of Volgrim entering Europe and attacking several major cities.
Ben lowered his gaze as he felt the sudden alteration of the Supreme Commander, at her most base level. She had always been one of the most peace loving people, and now…
"As you will, Supreme Commander. Let’s go, we can save the tears for later."
"Yes. Let’s."
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Marie stared with bewilderment at her screens. "Damn! The European device didn’t activate! If we don’t set it off, this will create one hell of a backlash!"
Satan felt emotions boiling through him as he stared at the small woman beside him. Was this intentional? Did she perhaps sabotage the second device? Nonsense, she wasn’t even in Europe and hadn’t inspected it. It couldn’t have been her.
Of course it couldn’t. This woman was ruthless. She was no friend of humanity.
Or was she?
Satan smoothed out his expression as she turned to look at him in bewilderment. Her confusion seemed genuine. It was probably just a glitch in the system. What else could have caused that device to misfire?
"It’s fine. We weakened humanity severely. The Volgrim are already attacking the key cities as planned. The ash cloud will eventually cover Earth, even if we didn’t take out the main technological centers in the other continents."
"It won’t happen quickly, though, Satan. The weather control systems will be able to hold the cloud off for several weeks, possibly months. Not just enough time for an evacuation, but enough time to figure out a solution to remove the cloud."
Marie bit harshly onto her fingernails as she watched the numbers coming in. Actually, it was worse than expected. The Americas were important for humanity to develop new technology, but doubtlessly there were still many well-fortified bunkers built underground that had taken little damage. For one thing, Marie’s own laboratory had likely survived just fine. What of the Type 3 Energy testing facilities? What about Jason Hiro’s own underground bases?
Marie snarled. This was a terrible outcome. Not the worst, but bad. Still, if humanity should survive and rebuild, then she’d simply have to switch sides. Playing both sides of the field, that was what she excelled at. Much like the bankers during WWII, she got along with leaders for both teams, and they in return would not begrudge her if she made a quick buck, or if she simply saved her own skin.
Yes, in the end, it didn’t matter who won. She would become one with the winner.
Still, who could have possibly sabotaged that device? It was protected by dozens of hundred digit codes. Simply unlocking the mainframe would take an ordinary person hours to get past the security. There was just no culprit, and it couldn’t have been a simple misfiring.
Marie continued to gnaw at her finger as that question weighed on her mind.



First!
Actually no, you were second. The bot was first.
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Sorry, I was excited, this is actually the first thing I check when I get to work everyday. Didn’t mean to be annoying.
Every time someone tries to claim “First” in this sub, they get downvoted to hell and several people (including Klok) bitch about how annoying it is and throw a slew of insults around.
At this point, how did you expect us to react, if you weren’t trying to be annoying?
Hold on now, I haven’t done that in weeks π
That’s fine, I actually don’t read much of the comments, so I didn’t catch the hate for this. I do apologize again to all, I meant no disrespect or harm.
It’s fine dood. Personally, I blame myself for starting up vitriol against innocent commenters back in the day.
It’s all good. I forget how worked up people can get over comment sections sometimes. Let me just say that I have been a big fan of this series and I wish you nothing but the best. It amazes me how you churn these out with such speed and consistency, while maintaining the story lines and quality. You are very talented and I could see this being a book someday. I was glad to see you decided to scale back your work hours, but not quit – keep the bird in hand for awhile longer.
Yeah I actually realized it’s not the job I hated, but the long work hours. Working hard one or two days a week rather than sitting on my ass on a PC all day is good for me. Besides that, the job allows me a minimum income threshold that will soon allow me to move into a much bigger apartment soon. Can’t wait!
“Glad you see you, supreme commander…”
‘s always something π
(Maybe he’s glad he checks herself out in the mirror every morning!)
I’m^so^sorry^but
>HE checks HERself out
^don’t ^kill ^me
ill fuggin kill u
π
^nopls
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AND HIS NAME IS
JOHN
Is this the one of the trumpets of apocalypse?
Great part. Love how this is going with Amelia/Levi
How does it have 18381 characters yet 3186 words???? I’m confused
Do you know what the difference is between a character and a word?
oh I thought it meant actual characters like Amelia… ;-;
pahahaha
You might want to omit the part about Harold having potentially lost millions of grandchildren and great grandchildren, Klok. In a previous part you said he didn’t have any kids which therefore means no grandkids and certainly no great grandkids
Oh hm, good catch.
You can make it “relatives”. I don’t think you told us whether Harold has brothers/sisters
I still hope Jason will become the first demon king (as said earlier) If It’s not him It’s the volgrim leader, since they said he had a massive amount of spiritual energy.
I’m starting to realize how much Harold’s gone through with war. When he wasn’t even 21 he went through the hell of what was called the War to End All Wars. Twenty years after that ended with an Armistice, Poland was invaded. A few more years, he saw as Pearl Harbor shocked the world. The second World War ended with the first use of nuclear weaponry. Harold and Helen passed away shortly after, but in the afterlife, they would have seen the terrors that happened in their absence. Now, they’re watching a World Engine destroy half a planet.
The only time I ever saw this in media was in the Amazing Spider-Man Volume 2, issue 36 (overall number 477), the Black Issue, made with all profits going to a September 11 charity. Taking a pause from the relief effort, Peter looks over the devastation, and sees Steve Rogers, just standing there and sinking it all in.
> “…. the air, filled with questions. ‘Is it going to happen again? What do I tell my children? Why did this happen?’ They ask the question. Why? Why? My god, why? I have seen other worlds. Other spaces. I have walked among gods and wept with angels. But to my shame I have no answers. He’s the only one who could know. Because he’s been here before. I wish I had not lived to see this once. I can’t imagine what it is to see this twice.
I can’t imagine.”
> I’m starting to realize how much Harold’s gone through with war. When he wasn’t even 21 he went through the hell of what was called the War to End All Wars. Twenty years after that ended with an Armistice, Poland was invaded. A few more years, he saw as Pearl Harbor shocked the world. The second World War ended with the first use of nuclear weaponry. Harold and Helen passed away shortly after, but in the afterlife, they would have seen the terrors that happened in their absence. Now, they’re watching a World Engine destroy half a planet.
This is a really good summary of what I’m writing with regards to him. Keep in mind, he directly fought in WWI and was a military commander in WWII, so he experienced the hell of both wars, as well as the general bureaucracy and nightmare of government sending off young men to die in stupid wars fought over greed and ambition.
He’s a cool old man, but he’s certainly not an innocent man and he committed many atrocities himself. It doesn’t mean he did them willingly, he’s just a soldier who obeyed orders.
Edit: Also, after Harold passed, his wife was in heaven watching the stuff happen, but he was in limbo inside the orb, speaking to nobody until Jason picked it up. At first, he had no idea what had happened for the few decades after he died. He had to learn all of it secondhand from Jason and later on Helen as well.
That’s my most treasured comic.
“build above ground”, should be “built”.
Dang it, I fixed that already. Curse you Reddit!
thank you for the birthday wishes klok!
Man am I glad I stuck with this series of the orginal writing prompt. Such a great story. I gladly oay for it.
The first twenty or so episodes were rough, for sure, but the depth of the storytelling just held it up easily. Now that the writing is much better and the melody of the storytelling more suited to the episodic nature of this medium (reddit), this could compete for sure in the self publishing market if the author further tunes his character developement and story archs. In fact I believe there wouldn’t have to be a work around for the episodes themselves. This is in fact similar to how many books were being published back in the 19th century. Authors send their subscribers letters with new parts of larger novels, receiving payment for each part and also incorporating written feedback from their fans. The reason being that most book-based literature was being pirated all the time, so that no single author – other than the most famous ones – could actually make a living from book sales. Thus, they turned to episodic storytelling, with great success.
For me, this genre here – “power fantasy novel” I would call it – might be very well suited for this type of publication.
Source: I work in the publishing field in a small european country.
> The first twenty or so episodes
I’d say right up to like, say, 70 or so. I didn’t know what I was doing until roughly that part.
All the more praise for you, then. This proves that your original idea has merit, because it holds up that easily. Kinda like computer games: They can be complicated as hell, but for them to be actually fun, they always need one simple core concept.
It is the same with storytelling. If you can describe an interesting premise to absolutely anyone in one or two sentences, you got yourself a worthy idea. Sometimes that premise becomes apparent after the fact, like apparently in your case after some free flow writing, buts thats Okay too. Thats how i get through writing blocks. But it is important to identify what makes you stuff “work” and stick to it.
My wish is that all good writers paid attention to literary theory and their major types in school to at least somewhat identify their own work in a larger context. I know several fantasy authors who sadly only ever publish one good book of a series and afterwards draw the wrong conclusions as to why it was popular and thus taking it in the wrong direction.
Best of luck to you, anyway. I shall increase my donation to you shortly.
Speaking of which, I have lots of ideas for fun video games. Maybe once I’m a multi-trillionaire I’ll get to work making them a reality π
After being more than 80 parts behind and finally managing to catch up again all I can say is MOAR! Keep up the great writing, I’m still loving the story as much as I was in the first few parts!
MOAR PLEASE I NEED THE KLOK
I fell asleep halfway into writing the next part. I’m going to finish it now, might take a couple hours though cause I just woke up.
I love where this story is going! Just a little detail, when a superior officer walks into a room, whoever sees that person first only yells “ATTENTION!” Then the officer who walked in will give the command “at ease” when ready.
Pff, maybe in your primitive 2016 mentality.
Aight, will fix it xP